Peer Feedback

 I'm pleased that I have recieved feedback from my peers. I will take their comments into mind and make the changes to my blog, my main focus will be to expand on my first year of A level.

However, I don't agree with the second post note, I think that my plot line is easy to understand what is going on, and eventhough I am grateful for their feedback, I don't think they took their time to read my blog. But I will try and make it easier for everyone to understand.

Apart from that post note, I agree with all of the other feedback.